woah! that's so awesome! i love it! grungy... i luv it cuz on the outside it makes no sense, but there's a deeper meaning... wahoo! awesome! someone who speaks my language! haha. great job! keep it up!

Gotta hand it to ya, this has got to be one of your best works. I really dig the last stanza. Makes it more real.

This is probably my favorite of your poems that I've read today. Very, very nice. I don't have anything specific to say about it since it's all good, but I love the last stanza-especially "I powder my nose with a one-dollar bill". Very concise. I like.