 alex 2009-02-20 . chapter 1 I love your story.Hope you update soon(:Did you give up on it,I hope not! |
 Riku-sama 2005-09-16 . chapter 6Hi Kairi-chan! I finally am getting around to reading my reviewers stories... *wipes away a sweat drop* But this story blew me away! I'm totally in love with it! Your characters are well developed and very well rounded. I love the plot and the storyline, which really caught my eye. But this story is just so unbelievely good that I couldn't stop reading it! You're gotten me hooked on it! Trust me its going on my favorites! I hope you'll update soon, b/c I'll definitely read it as soon as you updated it (which I hope is real soon!) Ja Ne for now! ^-^ Keep up the awesome work! -lightofhope18 |
 Evan-Cora 2005-07-05 . chapter 6It's perfect except for a few grammar mistakes! Update soon! |
 shadowofdeath90 2005-03-26 . chapter 6Hmm... so that's why you haven't updated in fanfiction.net. Can you guess who I am? Hint: my pename, minus the 90, is one of my stories. Cool fic by the way, can't wait for the next chap. |
 Hyacintha 2004-08-12 . chapter 5Oi intresting very intresting. PLEASE I BEG you to update! |
 Natty Kat 2004-08-09 . chapter 5>_> Yesh, very mysterious! o_o why is aiko mad??
And I stopped writing that story because I wasn't sure at the time where it would go. @_@ hopefully I'll pick it back up later on. When I actually have a secure plot down. ^^;
o_o but yesh, a very interesting chappie! oVo MYSTERIOUS MAN! REVEAL YOURSELF!! ::shakes fist at the man in black:: |
 Brutal Angel 2004-07-10 . chapter 4Wah sugoi! Kyouji is so hot! *hugs on a Kyouji-plushie* |
 yasuyasu 2004-06-17 . chapter 4I like this story! Very cute |
 Natty Kat 2004-06-16 . chapter 4Oh, I love it! ^^ I wrote a story like this, but I quit in the middle of the first chapter...^^; That guy dressed in black sure is mysterious! ^^;; ::ponders about what the man will do next:: |
 Sakura Riu 2004-06-01 . chapter 3 My dream guy can't be real either. I share your pain |
 KrAeMiUaI 2004-05-30 . chapter 3*points at FP.com bio* Ü hai hai! ^_^
T_T Ahuhu... Anyway, there are really instances where someone would 'like' his\her own drawing. At least, it's like saying... 'I can draw my soulmate.' Ahihi.
BTW, I have a feeling you were eager to submit this right away. ~_^ Don't be in a rush. Check your grammars and words. Your tenses started to change. |
 KrAeMiUaI 2004-05-28 . chapter 2Wahihi. /gg this one's nice. T_T How i wish these things would defenitely turn to reality... T_T BooHoo. I wish one of my drawings would become alive. Ahihi.
Anyway, not bad. Except for... >.< (Now i understand what she meant.)I would suggest that you use the japanese words lesser than usual. Or if possibly, not. It's because this is an english fic. Japanese words may possibly used when it's a noun (sample is Sakura tree to cherry blossom tree) or when you think it's appropriate (sample is 'Itadakimasu' - cannot really be translated because it's like a thanksgiving prayer in japan before eating; a ritual before eating.)
Well, that's about it. Hope this helps you. This is just a suggestion and you shouldn't take it that seriously. I know you're adapting your writing to Anime and it's understandable. ^_^
BTW, I like your imagination. Pwede ba mahiram? ^_^ Wahihi *peace* Joke lang. |
 Sakura Riu 2004-05-21 . chapter 2 Wai kawaii! Motto! |
 Brutal Angel 2004-05-12 . chapter 1OOh cool! Continue nee? |