I liek it.. nice metaphor

Good to have you back writing. I like this poem. It reads well and has a nice layout. Nice last stanze and ending too.
I am an improved writer since you last saw my works,I have been practising.
Good luck in all your works
Nine Iron

Very repetetive, but not bad. I don't think it is one of your best, but it has a strong message attached.

WOW! What a great poem. I can really feel the emotions running around. By the way, would you read my poems too? :p Anyways, you are great! And I would add you to my favorites. GJ!

told ya it was nifty in person, i'mjust now getting around to an actual review...but it's pretty.

This is good. Your right, sometimes you do need to just get it all out of your system and let let go. Really well worded. Good job.