Reviews for Daddy's Little Girl

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Alisabeth 2005-10-27 ch 1,	abuseExcellent, the topic at hand hits me very close to home as I am still in high school and my mother has just passed away. Keep up the good work!
eden is burning 2005-06-19 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, genius Kat! I am upset that it is only one chapter :( Oh well, it was worth it and I'll get over it! Now i am off to read the next part of the trilogy... byee xx
arnoth 2005-04-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseexcellent plz continue. very good. adding it to favourites.
STORY LOVER 2005-02-10 ch 1, anon.	abusePLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE WRIT MORE!I ABSOULUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!
Betta 2004-12-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI absolutly LOVE this story, it is one of the best things i have ever read, I hope you decide to wright more. PLEASE, PLEASE DO. P.s. you can E-mail me.
David Stephen 2004-07-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is fabulous LLNFT. I don't know if you did it on purpose - but the way you have made it very short and only one chapter - well its overwhelming. It reflects how she feels - this chapter is alone, and isolated. It is tense and the reader feels it - feels what is going on because of the shortness of the chapter. It also shows about the character. The story is wrote from first person - its as though its a recount or diary entry - and this one is short. It reflects how she feels - she cannot be bothered to write alot - because of the grief she feels. A terrific installment, and I loved the last sentence - describing her feelings, and the installment itself. :D faboulous. luv david x
Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-17 ch 1,	abusei just realised this is only one chapter.. i was expecting it to be a few, like the first one.. still i should stop complaining coz i know theres a third part for me to read.. plus this is really good.. i love the last bit!
Celeste Se'oir 2004-06-18 ch 1,	abuseAww, that's so sad! Umm...umm...DOn't know what else to say... Later, ~Ffuffy~
Da Buffster 2004-06-11 ch 1,	abuseWow. I have to say, wow. I can't remember if I reviewed the Past Tense one, but if I didn't same goes for that :P Sorry this is a lil bit late, oh what the hell, it's only a month :P (aint that just the best smiley?) Can you change it from one shot into something longer, showing how she heals, and how she moves on? I for one, would definetly read it :P 'I felt so alone and isolated. Tears welled in my hazel eyes as I thought I’ve only got Dad left. I’m just Daddy’s little girl.' Beautiful line there, love it. x DB
Diana Shore 2004-05-19 ch 1,	abuseThis can't be the end? I like the continuation of the story, just wish there was more. Good job.
Eien Nemurigusa 2004-05-14 ch 1,	abuseAww that is just so sad. If I liked crying I would cry but that is so sad! Very well done again time after time I say that. Uh a sentance didn't quite feel right it t'was I closed my eyes tightly, willing the world to go away; but it didn’t. You might want to put "...Willing for the world.." or "wanting" instead of 'willing' That all I ahve to say but a very sweet/sad ending
strawberries'n'sugar 2004-05-14 ch 1,	abuseIt's nice to see some more of this story. It's so sad. I'd like to hear more, please? B.
i wanna be a pastry 2004-05-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat?! I can't believe only THREE people have reviewed this! It's great as always! I do hope you continue...:)
Infinity Plus One 2004-05-13 ch 1,	abuseYou have an articulate story there, well done. By looking at the picture, I'm assuming that you are paying for your account? I'm not sure. But I think that was a good, albeit short, but good story.
Nat Rich 2004-05-09 ch 1,	abuseGood story. I liked it, but just a little confused if this is a story on its own or this is a prolouge..hmm PLEASE E-MAIL ME. Nice job! -Nat Rich

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