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Reviews For: Silk and Stone

virgo-valentina 2005-10-15 ch 3,	i really like yur story. pls update!
depressed-and-bored 2004-12-30 ch 3,	Oh no it can't be. NOT DONAGH'S SHIP. Plz lry him be alive.I love this story.PLZ UPDATE
DramaQn16 2004-09-28 ch 3,	THat was so good! Please please please update again soon! Your a great writer!
The Unbreakable 2004-09-22 ch 1,	AWESOME! The imagery, the characters, the situation...it all was terrific! On the favorite authors list you go!
the-beautiful-tragedy 2004-09-20 ch 3,	oh no!! this is a very well written story. characters are good, but its sad...
Theadacia 2004-09-19 ch 3,	Whoa! Good Job again, Pommie! It's really weird but between the two stories it reminds me of one of mine. I had a story that jumped back and forth too, but not quite as much as yours, only toward the end when it was taking place over 2 revloutionary battles. I'd like to read more, but I do have to say I think I liked your other book a bit better, I suppose because I can realate to it a bit more. Do you read Tamora Pierce? Cause for some reason your styles are alike, but maybe it's just me. Allot of authors are like her, I'm sure that some would say I'm like her too, but I don't think so. Again there are a few gramical things, but I can really see an improvment on that with your new book, so I can tell that you've been writing more. So where's the rest of the stuff! Donagh in that second chapter when they're dancing, I almost melted thinking about it. Good illistartions. But I'd like to edit this book as well. Devoted fan Thea. I'd love to hear from you and hear what you'd say about mine. I'm just dying to point a few wonderful things out for you, but it's kinda hard in the space that they gave to you, besides I don't remeber all of them. But that dance! Beautiful babes. loveya, your friend Thea
Lady Cyann 2004-06-06 ch 3,	What a sad chapter. Meriel must be very strong, the way she can steel herself and cope with the loss of her mother and her missing love. Please continue this story, because I love the way it's going and the descriptions are lovely. I can practically taste the salt of the sea...LOL. Wonderful job, keep up the good work. Write on! ~LC~
Lady Cyann 2004-06-06 ch 2,	Oh my gosh! She's pregnant! I'm just glad that Meriel had Ena to help her through her dilemma. I sure hope that Donagh comes back soon, because Meriel obviously needs him. Another wonderful chapter, as the first was. The mood was very good, and I could picture each scene very nicely. Well done, and keep up the good work. Write on! ~LC~
Lady Cyann 2004-06-06 ch 1,	Ooh! What a great start to this story! I am looking forward to reading more, and you're descriptions are positively beautiful. A wonderful job, please keep up the good work. ~Lady Cyann~
l. fayette 2004-05-25 ch 3,	This is EXTREMELY good. I can't wait for more! .:Lady Fayette:.
poohba 2004-05-23 ch 3,	I have to admit, I'm getting used to the jumping back and forth through time. And it's not so bad when she thinks back and stays there for awhile, as she did in this chapter g * Isn't Donagh a sweetie in this chapter! * And you've left us with a cliffhanger. I hate cliffhangers. lol. But they do keep the reader wanting to come back for more. That's a good thing. I'm notorious for writing them, myself. I guess me not liking to read them is somewhere along the lines of a doctor being a terrible patient. * Anyway, this story still intrigues me. So much of it is still lying under the surface, waiting to be revealed - and I'm looking forward to a chance to read it.
Val Mora 2004-05-20 ch 3,	You know, from the way he acts sometimes, I'm almost certain that you mean for Donagh to be a selkie. Is he? I like your characters and I think the situation is believable. The flashbacks are very cleverly dated (and it's much appreciated), and your description is wonderful. However, I sometimes feel like the characters - especially Ena and Meriel - don't act very mature at all. This may, perhaps, be because they aren't old enough to be mature, but think about how you might convey them as being more adult-like.
Fearless-Sweep-Gurl 2004-05-18 ch 3,	AH! Luv ur story! plez update soon! plez don't let dongagh, if he does, I'll... I'll...I'll stop reading your story! so KEEP HIM ALIVE! WHOA sry suga high... O... p.s. ur story is now added to "My Favorite Stories" list Lucky, Lucky You!
Ravynne 2004-05-17 ch 2,	This story is exceptionally well written. Your word choice is incredible and really does justice to your description in this piece. I'm adding this to my favorites list so that I may look out for updates.
poohba 2004-05-16 ch 2,	The first chapter in this story was really intriguing... very mysterious, which fits into it's setting very well. I can just picture the Irish sea and coastline as you write. You word choice is excellent. This reads like a published novel and I really want to see where this goes next. Is Donagh dead? Why isn't he back yet? What will Meriel do if he doesn't come? The only fault I can even begin to pick with this story is it's kind of jumpy. It goes back and forth in time very quickly, not giving me much of a chance to settle in. I liked that in the first chapter, just to get a feel for the main characters and what their relationship to each other is, but I wondered why you didn't begin this second chapter where you ended off with the first, since you eventually did come back to that scene anyway. Well, that's being nitpicky. On the whole, I loved this beginning and it's going on my favorite's list.

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