Ack! Wow! Thanks for writing this - it's perfect! I feel like this should be pasted on my wall.

that's so sad... but its a good poem. BTW, that line in your bio under things that annoy me- Guys who think they're players yay! that drives me INSANE! The last guy i liked thought he was a player, and he's like the least playery person ever. LOL. Anyway, i'll quit rambling.

very nice, i know how mothers can be, read "pleasure" a poem i wrote, its about how my mother angers me. nice write, i'll go read more now.

short and sweet, very cool. Thats how I feel when my dad looks at me. He doesn't love me, he loves my younger sister, I was the outcast. Very good, keep it up!

It's a good poem, I like the quotation marks around "flawless". The only thing I could suggest is making it a little longer, or continuing with another poem...? _;; I dunno, just a suggestion.

You've put down what I know many of us think, in words. Thank you for writing a poem about such a universal topic. I always seem to feel inadequate, whether it's of my mother or friends, and it saddens me that so many other people feel the same way. Amazing job on a touching poem.

I like it, very simple and very clear. not many can say so much with so little words!

i liked that you contrasted by saying that your mother's eyes were "flawless" and you were the one that was flawed...good job
thanks for the review, by the way

Sad, I like how you put "flawless" in quotes, and the compare that to your own faults. This was a nice poem

That's sad. However, it was a VERY good haiku. I suck at writing haiku (which is why I don't post them.) I really like your haiku, you do a good job on them. Hope things work out with your mom someday.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thanks for the review on chapter 2.

Somehow there is always a time in love where I get this feeling. Where I am not meeting the expectations of the person I am with. Sighs. Nicely written, enjoyed it.

ARGH! Feel like crying. This is what I used to think too. still kinda do. Anyway, i liked the simplicity yet honesty of your poem. Very nice.

Very nice senryu... awsome piece... keep up the great work...

Sad. Very nicely done. I kinda got the opposite problem.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

Hey! I really like this poem. I can relate. Well, good job! It's going on my favorites! :)