I loved it. Please update

Hmm..another vampire story, geez everything is getting to be too cliched now, and this is exactly one of them.

hey very good and suspencful, also very good descriptions and imagery. definatly do some more, i'd be very interested to see how it goes!

A good first chapter. The story's shaping out nicely. Update soon!

XD don't leave us hanging like that!! write more soon please!

slightly abrupt ending, but it just makes me want to continue reading.

excellent start.

Woundful so far I need more now

This is going to be good. Update soon.

Interesting begining. I think you have a good premise, it goes on a little more than I think it should (just my opinion, I like things to get right to the point.) Anyway, this is mechanically well written. I'm anxious to see where you go from here. Good job, keep writing.
**Slave**

this seems to be a promising story. continue!

WOW...Sweet start I want more please
*From Daughter of the Grim Reaper*

OOh i like it! Love tales about vampires, this is very cool! like all the questions to no one. Can't wait for next chapter!