well, thanks honey... i really wanted to read that again! don't need to criticise as well... i've seen it before. and (oh yeah) its good

aw, that's a sad ending! Really clever story, though...but it could use some serious cleaning up. Too tired to do it now--email me at moonymonster@hotmail.com to get my full, editor-in-chief review if you want it. (It's near midnight and I'm really tired. *yawn*)
night!