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| Emtec 2005-11-06 ch 3,  | abuseThis looks really interesting, it's good and you've surely got potential! Please update soon, i want to know what happens! |
| Elizabeth Ebony 2005-10-01 ch 3, | abuseWow-lovely story.I like it that you made Fenella look like Catherine-that's a nice touch.I also like your descriptions of Elizabeth-they're accurate.Just,wow.You haven't updated this for so long...are you ever going to? please please do.Haha,I liked Margaret and Anne,too.Not so sure why,it just felt as if they were real people and not just two made up characters...that is what it felt like with Fenella.She seems so real.Wonderfull,dude,please continue! E.Ebony |
| at this volume 2004-07-21 ch 3, | abuseThis is really a great story so far- and the characters a really intriguing already I like Fenella. Sorry this review is so short but I'm in a rush. I just wanted to let you know you have another reader! |
| Catwoman99 2004-06-29 ch 3, | abuseWell, I'm hooked now. I look forward to an update. :-) |
| Catwoman99 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abuseHey buddy! This is a very intriguing intro. Elizabeth I happens to be one of my favorite historical figures. Good job. :-) |
| Gamgee Girl 2004-06-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseIs Fenella a real person? I was looking on a Howard family tree and she was not there. . . I thought you should add a note or something if she's not. Oh, and in Tudor England, with very few exceptions, people did not have middle names. . . thought you might like to know that as well. However, I enjoy your writing style very much and hope to see this story continued very soon! |
| Gamgee Girl 2004-06-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseI think the foreshadowing is about to kill me. Honestly, you're very good at that type of thing. -Gamgee |
| Systole 2004-06-10 ch 3, | abusewell, doesn't elizabeth sound lovely, I like Fanella, the plot is good and the mood is right for the setting, the time. keep on typing... |
| J.E.Wyatt 2004-05-26 ch 2, | abuseGreat read, I really hope you will update as soon as possible |
| zagato 2004-05-11 ch 2, | abusewow! i like your story. your description of elizabeth struck me. when you said that she had old eyes, i even looked at a mirror to look at my eyes. somehow, i feel the same way. after all i was named after her. thank you for writing and i look forward to more of your fascinating story. |
| L. Elliot 2004-05-10 ch 2, | abuseMaggie? That's a riot. Elizabeth I did have a fondness of nicknames. (There was her "Eyes" Robin Dudley and then their was "the Moor" who I can't remember...) You write very well. I really would like to see this continued. |
| KirjavaLyra 2004-05-10 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story, because it sounds as if this were the way things really happened back then. I think you should add more detail about where the castle was, and what it looked like. And write more soon, because this is really good, and I can't wait to read more! |
| faery tragedy 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI like the premise. It sounds promising! Were you watching "Elizabeth" before you started writing? Because it definently has the same elegant overtones as the actual movie. And in addition, the last lines were nice and dramatic. Best of luck, and please continue! - *Faery Tragedy |
| KirjavaLyra 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was a good introduction to a story, and I want to read more soon. |
| urban kitsch 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis story seems historically sound, in addition to being an interesting story in itself. The numerous interjections are mildly distracting, though, so I would try to refrain from using them too often. I'm anticipating your next chapters! |