|Reviews for Wandering False Reality|
| Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 333 7/19/04 . chapter 1
In my opinion it isn't as great as some of the others, but like it anyway. This just shows that you're a real, real good writer.
| AntiPleasure 6/16/04 . chapter 1
I think the title suits this one quite well myself. I like the feel of this one. I could write a million things here about it, but it's just very nicely done. So keep on writing! )
| Wrathful Diana 5/30/04 . chapter 1
Read some stuff by Edgar Allan Poe, he's the master of poetry, my favorite poems by him are 'The Raven' and 'Lenore' reading stuff by famous authors often helps you build skills beyond your currently high level.
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 5/29/04 . chapter 1
O so good. I get that he/she is staying there because it's the only thing they've known, it's a 'safe' bet to stay, even if you don't exactly like living like that.
did that make sense? i hope it did.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/15/04 . chapter 1
wow, im liking this who format thing you got going on
| vanburen 5/13/04 . chapter 1
Oy, vey. Your poetry is so ass-kicking awesome. I love the lines "Can you find the way out?/Do you want to?" It makes me think of how if you are stuck in what you perceive to be a pointless existence, part of you hates it, but at the same time, another part of you doesn't want to leave it. Because that's the only thing you've ever known, right? Given the opportunity to escape what would you do with your newfound fredom? This was 100% goodness. TTFN!
| TaschaBear 5/11/04 . chapter 1
really creative hun! Made me think!
Well see ya next period!
I might work on Isle of Vampiers! And I posted my poem! yeah!
| Eagle Seance 5/10/04 . chapter 1
Hmm... i like your stuff. i think i shall add u to my fav authors thing.
another great poem. Don't stop writing!
i think I'm 'eternally spinning round in circles' lol. Like now.
| Eternal Aeris 5/10/04 . chapter 1
Weird...I've got this weird feeling of reading this once before...oh well, it's just me! keep up the good work jake! Hey! You haven't reviewed me lately! I've updated like 3 poems too!
| Christy 5/10/04 . chapter 1
Watz up? ok i put my email addy there so email me what u needed to tell me. I really like all ur poetry, its sweet and really deep, well for me newayz. oh and i got to talk to you. its important..kinda.
See ya 2morrow,
| Breaking Heart 5/10/04 . chapter 1
hey, is exactly what i feel at points in great,but i like it all the same.
your irish lover
| till-iburnout to lazy to sign in 5/9/04 . chapter 1
It's very good. I like it.