_ I like these kinds of poems that remind me of people! I love your poem, Its very sweet! _

I really liked this one. As everyone else said, "so short and so much emotion." I think you are doing a great job. This poem really "paints a portrait" for me, so to say. CelestP.S.- Thanks so much for the review!

aw, i love that. Short, but beautifully written. There is so much emotion in so few words, you have definite talent.

I like this one, its very emotional! :)

Hidy hi there hunny! WOW gosh, only 17 words... but ohh my freaking god it's just such an amazing poem, and heh you can really feel the cuteness, it's just that ah cutenessness feel to it! Love it _

Short but deep. Keep up the great work

what i find interesting about this poem is how different it is from the last one "flawless shell" . Submited on the same day. But none the less, it is simple, smooth, and all around good.

Can you space this poem, so that you have paragraphing between each stanza, because I think it would add to the poem.
I like this one. Good work.
- Jennacharm

This is cute, sweet...
PS: Thanks for your review for me and Nine Iron on "The Atlantic."