Reviews for The Hunter Turned

Reviews For: The Hunter Turned

Ryla Dante 2005-02-27 ch 1,	All I can really say is...WOW!! I was readin it and like, who is it, who is it?? Then bam. You know how to shock 'em.
Catherine Abellanosa 2005-02-18 ch 1,	ok, i liked the story but a lot of things are bugging me...who's Nosferatu? is he a killer? that part kind of got me confused... and the story kind of got me hanged...it's like i want to know what happened next...did the doctor struggle or not? but i may say that the story was nice...it could really be in the fave's list if it was not that lacking...i really want to know what happens next...hehehe... [by the way, thanks for reviewing my work] keep up the good work!:->
Ebony Moonlight 2004-06-27 ch 1,	Initially, the summary caught my eye; then upon noting the word count (6), I knew that I had to read this. lol It's a well constructed piece of fiction and an interesting read. Keep up the great work!! ~The One and Only
Merit Somnia 2004-06-18 ch 1,	The story had a good real life aspect in the way he is frustrated at his lack of findings and the ending well... rather exciting.
Hawklen 2004-06-15 ch 1,	Well done, I must say I love your descriptions,especially the one about the mountain ranges, I can easily imagine your the scenery, you should continue on with your writing Good Luck
Willum 2004-06-14 ch 1,	Actually, not bad at all. Would like to see it go on, developing into a rather lengthy story, but I gather from your profile that that's not going to happen. Oh, well. Still, a short (too short), nice read.
aqua-angel 2004-05-23 ch 1,	Heyaz! Great intro on the story, I like the plot. I think you should continue it, and you just HAD to leave a cliffy there didn't you? Grr... lol, jk I still think you should continue you it. Now for things you can work on: Its a pretty short piece but well-written (amazing that its exactly 6 words O_o how symbolic) you could still use a bit more descriptions and theres a few awkward sentences that can be fix. Nothing big of course. Great job :) PS: Thanks for reviewing Lost Touch
slave to the voices 2004-05-16 ch 1,	This was my first attempt at a vampire story. Not my best work, but it's hard to find something new to do with vampires. Also, it was an odd coincidence that it worked out to be 6 words. Anyway, I appreciate ALL reviews, thanks to everyone. Slave
Angelic Hellraiser 2004-05-14 ch 1,	Sorry for the way I acted earlier. I love nosferatu. My other buddy/writer is on this site. His name is Utarefson. I worry for him sometimes. Anyway, I love your story. I would be honored if you'd check out my stories Shattered Butterfly & Razor Blade Kisses! THANK YOU, xXShattered ButterflyXx
Claudio Sanchez 2004-05-14 ch 1,	lovely how you made 6 words out of that. good overall writing
Coin Master 2004-05-10 ch 1,	Whoa! Freaky as. Won't be able to sleep for a while, i think. Was it part of the plan to have 6 words in it? If so - Good work! WL

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