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| pneumothorax 2005-05-29 ch 1,   | Wonderful. |
| Manju 2005-05-13 ch 1, | lol, my poems for some reason have to rhyme. i guess i like to because there is some type of order there that isn't present in life. i'm weird, leave me alone! um, anyway, good job. but i do disagree with u. |
| Spector'sGirl 2005-04-21 ch 1, | very good - although i do enjoy both reading and writing rhyming poetry at times. but other times i agree. |
| l057 1n51d3 2005-04-18 ch 1, | hmm interesting. i like it. t.s. |
| Nothing Profound 2004-10-28 ch 1, | that's interesting...heh..you better not read any of my stuff...a lot of it rhymes...I need help, there- a lot of the poetry i write just pops into my head in rhymes...any idea how I can get out of the habit? ~FlowingQuill. |
| Cymoril Avalon 2004-10-14 ch 1, | I would simply love to agree with you, but I find that poetry that rhymes has a certain flow to it that really appeals to me. However, I know pretty much nothing about poetry (as you can probably tell by what I've written) and non-rhyming poetry is beyond me. =) I like how your poem is laid out though, by itself it's visually appealing. I really really like the last four lines. It sounds almost like you're hinting towards something more than you've expressed in this poem. Was there a particular situation that prompted this? |
| mizutenchi22 2004-08-12 ch 1, | You're right..rhyming poetry is annoying. You're an awesome writer. |
| Argantlyn 2004-07-25 ch 1, | Short, but SO true! I like it very much! ps r/r please! |
| xLecta 2004-06-29 ch 1, | LOVE it. Short and sweet are my type of poems :P Although..I can never make mine like that. I always have so much to say, gah, it's a curse. Well anyway, very good. I can relate to your idea and I love to format. Well done. Thanks for your review by the way. |
| CrimsonEnchantress 2004-06-25 ch 1, | interesting poem, seeing as all your other stuff was poetry. but i know what its like to be completely and utterly weary of just anything, even the most random. by the way, thx for your review! |
| Sillygoose49 2004-06-08 ch 1, | cute! I like it! guess I'll go and read some more of your poems...don't you just love summer vacay? Sillygoose P.S.: thanx for the review(s)! |
| Birdaloo 2004-06-08 ch 1, | short... very short. but intresting! short isnt bad, not in the least, as long as you have something in the few words to catch the reader. nice. ~Birdy |
| Breaking Heart 2004-06-04 ch 1, | um...NO! i can't rhyme either,but if you're going to write about how you hate a certain type,then maybe you didn't try hard enough or something. irish lover (wants not to do harm.only to help.) |
| Dream of Hope 594 2004-05-26 ch 1, | Hm... I used to hate rhyming but it comes in handy sometimes. I think... find your perfect, unique style of poetry then let it flow. Never question your heart on it and hope for the best. It seems in some of your poetry you get lost or scared of it. It seems so timid at times where others are so viberant and wounderful. It seems as if you start with pure confidece and then loose faith in your ability to write. Never let yourself loose that faith and confidence in your ability to write poetry. I can see that you could be a wounderful poet if you could let yourself fully beleive you can and you are one. If this sounds a little harsh I am truelly sorry but I hope it helps you discover what a wounderful poet you could be. PLz r and r some of mine *Princess Foxtails* *LittlePoet* |
| Anon 2004-05-12 ch 1, | Haven't read the "20 ways to say no". Have to email it to me. -FPO |