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| spootasia tomoe 2004-09-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseaww! i love the zebu one! it is so happy, but so wonderful that she is finally re-accepted and finds her true place with her old friends. on the chess one: very interesting! a self-inspired poem, perhaps? well, i was merely thinking that you wrote it well and the pawn was very interesting; the style and it's characteristics, how it talked and of what it talked to itself about- c'est bon! (not that chess peiced CAN talk to themselves... as far as we know... hmn, i am scared now...) the fabreeze one was cool. i liked how you managed to milk such philosophy from what seems like something so simple, so common and unspectacular, uninteresting... i'll never think of fabreeze the same way again! (and yet, perhaps it is for the better, ni?) anyway, very well done! i liked your poems, and thank you for reviewing mine so much! |
| spootasia tomoe 2004-09-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseaww! i love the zebu one! it is so happy, but so wonderful that she is finally re-accepted and finds her true place with her old friends. on the chess one: very interesting! a self-inspired poem, perhaps? well, i was merely thinking that you wrote it well and the pawn was very interesting; the style and it's characteristics, how it talked and of what it talked to itself about- c'est bon! (not that chess peiced CAN talk to themselves... as far as we know... hmn, i am scared now...) the fabreeze one was cool. i liked how you managed to milk such philosophy from what seems like something so simple, so common and unspectacular, uninteresting... i'll never think of fabreeze the same way again! (and yet, perhaps it is for the better, ni?) anyway, very well done! i liked your poems, and thank you for reviewing mine so much! |
| Seina 2004-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseO-o-oh...I like that! Even though I suck at chess...but I still like chess, and I like how you used it as a metaphor. Very nice. My life story. But my King doesn't have blue eyes. Beautiful dark brown eyes...~sigh~ I'm rambling, you don't want to know this. ~Lady Merlin PS> I don't think it's cliched either, because I've never heard chess used to describe the caste of school. I really like it. |