Don't you just hate when you can't beat up an old women in public? Just kidding... any way Ma- Mr. Deacon It was very creepy but hey that's all right. I like creepy.
*Colin peeks over and looks at screen with reviews" "Yeah that definatly sounds like some thing Matt would write."

nicely done. i like the ending, and the writing style.

So the old lady was his wife. I didn't pre-emt that one. I like the hardness of it, and the well-placed expletives. The characters were well made as well.
Paging Doctor Freud: You hate your parents.

Strange, unusual, yet interesting. I like it. Poor guy though. The wife seems bitchy.

burn the old lady! well, there goes the old people's supposed gentleness and stuff.

saicho_18 : slytherin ^-^

Disturbing, funny, morose, and clever at the same time!

The old lady reminds me of my own Grandmama..... except for the car..

Whoa, that's freaky. Good job.

i dint geht it... da hole ding confyoosed meeh... n yeht... ilyked it.... [now wut duz dat tell u bout meeh? udah den i kant spell korrektlie...]

i hab no idea but for sum stupid reason i lyked dat..

I found this rather amusing. Kinda cool, actually. I would like to see more of this guy's crummy life.