Aw it's a really cute poem. "And we seal our love with a kiss..." I'm geting inarticulate... and now jumping around poems and not saying as much... *apologises*

Peace, hearts and cheers.

Jess

Poignant and beautiful. Cheered me up, made me smile. Great stuff! :)

nice, but the "sigh my inaudible sigh" is a tad redundant. i loved your poem, but lose yourself in imagery a bit more. :)

Aw Carrie! a HAPPY poem! AW its SO sweet...aww...i love it...-rambles on and on-
Dani

A lovely poem, but I don't think the title quite fits. The title seems to imply something darker and gloomier, not this very hopeful tone. I don't know what to suggest, title-wise, only something a bit more in keeping with the general tone. Other than that, an excellent poem. It leaves me with a good feeling. Keep writing!

this is a lovely poem, really well written :)

This is a great poem. I can feel the emotions circling around the poem. By the way, would you read my works too? :p Anyways, this goes to my faves list. Again GJ!