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| dimethylmercury 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseAww... That bedpan thing was funny; I think I would have died if that have happened to me. I think this is more suited for a multi-chaptered than a one shot, but it's just an opinion. I thought the pace was slightly fast, but it was a lovely, humourous fic all the same(: |
| Shini Ikuto 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseshort but ending was sweet ^_^ maybe you could've made it longer by having them date or something? :D but it was nice notheless ^.^ ~Nai |
| Renee-Rose 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI like this story it was very cute. Love ya, Rose |
| Clodhopper 2004-08-19 ch 1, | abuseokay, first off, is Kayli ur real name? if so, that rocks...it's my name. even spelled the same. first time i've seen someone spell it the same... reviewing as i go - heh, interesting fact about the baby blanky. nice throwing the bedpan at the boss...cant say i'd react any different. i'd like to know how that conversation went tho. whoa, what the fuck is right? gettin kicked out because she quit? wha...? geez, Jake sounds like a creep. lol, nice way to end it. interesting to see what happened to matt and her after that one. ~Mack (Kayli) |
| hidden.contradiction 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuseooh.. it may have been the worst day ever.. but now you get a kiss from the hottest guy ever and it's all okay! hehe. nice work. i'll be back to read this again. update soon. toodles! |
| forgotton1 2004-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like this chapter, and the ending really made me go 'aw' until Jake came in, and then I started laughing when I read the rest. Great job, please update. |
| lostinthesupermarket 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abuseBloody fucking Brilliant. |
| pentara 2004-05-10 ch 1, | abusegreat chapter! please update - i'm intrigued :D |
| kelseypaige 2004-05-10 ch 1, | abuseOhh! It's so cute! Haha, The whole bedpan senario was SO fuuny! I was laughing to myself for quite a while. *Dreamy sigh* Looks like your heroin got what she deserved after all. Love it to pieces hun! ~Fallen Fantasist |
| Faded Soulfire 2004-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is adorable Kayli! I loved this story and how you chose to end it. A very enjoyable short story! So, I think this is a great, cute, and funny story. All in all, it brightened up my day. - Faded Soulfire |
| darkness falls 2004-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethere were a couple of places where you said jake, where i think you meant matt, but other than that, pretty good |
| Selphie 2004-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That was so good! PLEASE continue! |
| Chelsea Plum 2004-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAw...That was cute! lol. I like it. lol. Keep writing! Chelsea |