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Kasey 2008-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseAs much as I was hoping this would be a good story, I just can't get into it. First off, having rings on your wedding finger does not necessarily mean that you are married. So I just can't figure out her reason for assuming that right away. and the main character Jude seems like a direct copy of Draco Malfoy from Harry Potter. Grey eyes, silver blonde hair, rich, refined, and snooty. It seems to be a direct copy. Also, in the middle of this chapter, you changed POV. It started with the girl's pov, and abruptly switched to the boys. Which is a sign of inexperienced writing. Anyways, best of luck with this. ;3
book.babe15 2008-07-08 ch 33,	abuseaww it was so good!! i loved it
book.babe15 2008-07-08 ch 3,	abusei really like it so far!! i can tell this is going to get really good... :)
Jayjack 2008-07-04 ch 33,	abusethere would be no point in a sequel-everyone got their happy ending. i have when authors do that making sequels to everything the story ended be done it's over. awe the ending was perfect. so simple and :)
Jayjack 2008-07-04 ch 1,	abusebest morning after EVER. haha.
Mera004 2008-06-25 ch 33,	abuseAh, I loved this!! :D Before I started reading this, I had run into a bunch of stories that didn't really hold my interest. But this one certainly did--right in the first chapter. It was hilarious! And, I mean, it's not like this sort of plot-line has never been done before (the whole waking up and finding out that you're married sort of situation), but it was done extremely well. I especially liked both Lira and Jude's sarcasm. They're both just so funny. :D I absolutely love the humor that you had in here. I cannot tell you how many times I cracked up. I also like your varied vocabulary, haha. :) I guess it just made me happy after reading those stories I mentioned that I got tired of. Part of the reason they weren't so great was because they weren't well-written, you know? So yes, you made my day when I first came across this story (it was about three weeks ago. It took me so long to finish this because I got really busy with the end of my school year and getting a new job and all that, but trust me, I was dying to finish this. And now I finally have!). Thank you for writing this wonderful story!! I'm adding this to my favorites. :D
PaffleWaffle 2008-06-23 ch 5,	abuseThis has been amazing so far, I can't wait to continue reading it! Have you ever tried getting it published? You can use , I've heard great things about that website... but I'll keep reading it here for now. Fabulous story though!
Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-21 ch 33,	abuseAw that was adorable. :) Awesome job with the story, I couldn't stop reading it! Lol. I especially liked how you never even had to get either of them to say their loved each other. Brilliant. :D
Status-Writing 2008-06-19 ch 5,	abuseSuch a cute story! I've loved every minute it has taken me to read it! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the update! [ Status ]
Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-18 ch 6,	abuseI was chatting with my friend while reading your story and decided to look up 'sex laws'. Our conversation is unforgettable thanks to you. LOL. :)
Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abuseThe entire time I was reading this I was smiling. I already like Lira and yours story seems really funny. :)
bansira 2008-06-15 ch 33,	abuseHow cute was that? I know it might seem sad that i only leave one review at the end of the story, but i just happened to be too caught in this amazing and laugh-out-loud hilarious story to be able to stop, be it for even a short while. It's adorably lovely. Especially the begining, that was pure greatness.
NeverFinished 2008-06-02 ch 33,	abuseHe, loved your story. You did a great job with all the fights, I'm not much on arguments myself, i write myself, but i because i really personally don't like fighting with people, i have a heart time thinking up how a fight should go when i want it to happen in the book because, well, it's going to be boring if the stories all peace and love and happiness isn't it. In any case, great vocabulary as well. And good grammar. (Can't say that for all people who write on Fictionpress, but then, i have a feeling that a great part of them are still in high school. Sometimes their mistake just really ** me off. Plus, a lot of people on here make the same mistake. Especially with the word defiantly. A whole lot of people write definitely. Even i know the difference and English is only a second language for me. I'm from Holland. And that just annoys the hell out of me. But then, I'm rather picky that way, so...) In any case, I loved your story and I thought the ending quite fitting for how their relationship has been going on all this time. It just fits in with them, doesn't it. Keep up the great work. Toi Ti
xSilentTearsx 2008-05-27 ch 33,	abuseTruly amazing story! I loved it very much and am glad that you kept up the consistency in how love isn't always fireworks.It was different from most romance stories I have read - not too cliche which is always good. =P You have talent and a great deal of it too! I hope to read another story by you soon! =D
Kar00 2008-05-18 ch 33,	abuseTotally loved this.

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