Hey Jax.Your poetry is always so beautiful and unique. This one is very good.I love the imagery in it. Your work still inspires me. :)Oh and I'm back with new poems! So don't worry I haven't given up yet. The only reason I still write is because of you. Like I said earlier you poetry is just so creative and unique. Andrea

hmm its interesint.. i liek it a lot altho the first stanza seems mean toward stars lol

Oh pretty...like how night is so different from day in some ways but you know, it's not really that drastic...
Only one suggestion... most of your lines are independent phrases, except "Cheap and priceless entertainment/For the fools...". I think that would be better if "for" was uncapitalized. Other than that...amazing.

still very niftay. like it a lot, I do.

Liked the imagery a lot, don't know if I quite got it either, but the use of colors and the stars were really good. So pretty good over all, but I think you need to figure out the meaning.