This was very funny and enjoyable to read. ^_^

I like free form poems--this is good.
Favorite part:
"tell me a
thrilling enthralling pirate-ridden love story
a story that reminds me that I’m only human
so I can’t be happy all the time"

That was a little strange... No, really, I love it. That was really cool.
~avidelecteur

lol~ sorta cute~ and abit weird^^ i liked it! keep writing~

Heehee! All I can say is...GREAT!
~PinkyCD

I can definitely hear you saying every word of this. So ...you! Well done.

This is such a YOU poem that I was surprised by all the innuendo I found. Umm...ignore me.
I like it. It's just...if you look at it one way...never mind.

This is cute, and the bus thing is kind of cool. We all need to hear an awesome story once in awhile, don't we? Anyways, good job, this is cool.