*applauds* That was wonderful! Suspense up until the very end! (and a lingering feeling of wonder) I loved how he suddenly realized that his wife was alone and he was sort of battling his emotions of whether to enter the house or not. A truly amazing story! Of course, I will be reading The Boy when you start posting it. I cannot wait.
~mazasuki

Nice first chapter. I like the way you capitalized the names for effect.
I'll read the rest whenever I get a chance. It seems to be a very cool fic.
I love supernatural fics. Continue to write. Write to your taste.
Good job.

I am loving the insanity that he's starting to display in his later 'look-backs' (the stuff in the ** **). Ah! I want to know what Napier is planning. Although it's awesome from the journal perspective, I really want to know what this other man is thinking!
~mazasuki

Hi, I think it was you that tried to IM me on aol the other day but I was away from the computer, sorry. Anyway, I think the separation of church and state is too big an issue to be a pet peeve. I think of a pet peeve as something small that really irks you; mine is being put on hold, my wife's is when I leave the toilet seat up. However, this is a CHALLENGE, not a competition, you can write about anything you want.
**Slave**

Lol, thanks for the a/n. I really like your story and I don't mind reviewing at all. Wow, I like how he seems to be going a little insane, it seems very real (very suspenseful too). The ex-prisoner is cool. I love how your character sort of seemed to be 'reassuring' himself that the man wasn't talking about civilized societies...'only prison'. Very nice.
~mazasuki

Ahh! Stop it! The suspense is killing me! Lol, this is so good because I'm just dying to know what exactly happens that he's recounting not seeing. Once again, I really like the format because it's very suspensful and it's almost dramatic irony. M, please keep writing, I love this!
~mazasuki

So this is sort of the beginning of events that lead up to the prologue. *nod nod* I get it now. Very interesting. I like the journal format, it gets through everything efficiently and adds a sense of mystery because the reader isn't omnipotent. Keep writing! I really like this so far.
~mazasuki

An interesting begining, I can't wait to see where you take it, so far everything is very vague. I read some of your reviews for other works and you seem to know what you're talking about (surprisingly for someone so young). I would like to know what you think of some of my stories if you have time. Anyway, good job, keep writing.
**Slave**
PS. Stephen King's "It" was good, but I thought "The Stand", "Needful Things" and "The Talisman" were better.

I really like the way you introduced all (or the main, I'm guessing) the characters quickly, and efficiently. It's a good hook because I want to know how they're connected and so on. I like the way the QUAKING MAN had once loved the sea and now sees it as a prison. That really seems an accurate thought to me. Please update soon, I'm looking forward to reading more.
~mazasuki