|Reviews for Horror|
| I Am The Krow 5/19/05 . chapter 1
sounds good so far. keep writing!
| TheDamned6 5/23/04 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really awesome. I liked that creepy feeling that the story gave me. I find that sometimes if i see a certain horror film i keep thinking that it's gonna happen to me, and this story expressed that fear. You did a really good job here, well done!
| slave to the voices 5/11/04 . chapter 1
I think this is the beginning of a good story. You are young but I feel your writing is a few years beyond your years. The more you learn, the better you will write. Now for the problems I found: In a few places I noticed you changed the tense, not a big problem but I noticed because they interrupted the flow of the story. Next, I don't don't understand why you wrote the dialogue properly in some places and bunched it into paragraphs in other places. Other than those two problems, I thought this was well written and interesting. I hope you can give a well used idea your own special twist. Great job, keep writing.
PS. I would read your other pieces but I usually stick to stories under a certain amout of words because, unfortunately, I have precious little time to be on here. If you have time, I would love to hear what you think of my work. Take care.
| Kerrin Allen 5/11/04 . chapter 1
Good premise, but you need to be more descriptive in your writing, like describing the scenes at the movies, driving to the house, etc. A couple grammar mistakes too. Please R & R my story, CTreks.
| JD Kennedy 5/11/04 . chapter 1
Yeah you should continue this, but you should write for yourself, you don't really need other peoples opinions to continue writing. Try putting a new spin on the haunted house genre if you're worried. Anyway, yeah continue, it's a good first chapter.
R&R me please
| Love and Shadow 5/11/04 . chapter 1
Pretty good. I say you continue it.