I like this.. Shows the prosperity of the blessed few, while others live in complete poverty. Very saddening. I like the line "And a diamond ring on her middle finger" It seems like a metaphor for mocking the poor with her riches.

I really like this, it gives people something to think about other than them selves!

Wow! This poem s good. Great job! By the way, would you read my works too? :p Anyways, this is great and would go in my faves.