I like it, it seems kind of sweet. A little rushed, though. I definately think you should contine; you plan to anyway, so I don't think me saying this matters much, lol. Try longer chapters, maybe?

it seemed to go a little too fast for me, but I guess that's just my style. Good dialogue, and the descriptions are good. It just seems like it could be a short short story and could end the way it is.