wow, that was really an awesome poem. we've all felt this way at one time or another, and you've captured this unfortunate part of life very well. great job

~SG~

very descriptive and nice, aw well done!

This is really great. I love the entire metaphor of the house and how you keep with it through out the entire poem. The rhyming didn't seem forced at all either. The last two lines were great. Keep up the awesome work!

Wow...
I'm honestly awed by this. I can't really wrtie poetry, so I'm always impressed by those who can turn feelings into such beauty...but this ached with so many emtions, it...
Words fail me, really. I ecspecially liked the ending. Eh, I'm such a romantic sap. But it was beautiful, really. Keep writing!