|Reviews for So Flawed|
| Story-Teller's Aide 6/19/04 . chapter 1
very very powerful. a poem full of meaning and intellect and just pure power. well done :)
| vturnip 5/26/04 . chapter 1
I too am so tired of death and war. And it does feel like what the people say doesn't count. Thanks for the poem.
| De2nis 5/14/04 . chapter 1
I had to read this twice before I got the message, but I understand it now. There is alot of argument crammed in this poem and I must say this poem is, though I have read better, quite powerful. If I had to change one thing though it would be making the real message alittle less subtle.
| Heather Montgomery 5/14/04 . chapter 1
It's a very nice poem, but I'm having a little trouble figuring out what your position is. But that also makes it very interesting in itself and very open minded, kind of. I like it!
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/14/04 . chapter 1
ah i hate policitcs! but i like the poem.
| Linnet 5/12/04 . chapter 1
I like this a lot-though I'm a little unclear on your views-are you for the war or against it?