 Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 333 2004-06-08 . chapter 1*sighs sadly*
I think I know what you mean... thank you for sharing this piece with us.
I love it - the emotion you've put into this, your word-choice... everything - and hope that she's fine.
~Rach |
 Master Mind4 2004-05-20 . chapter 1Wow... this is powerful, beautiful, and perfect all rolled into one poem. Amazing job with wording and rhyme. I am very jealous of your writing abilities right now. |
 I'm Sorry 2004-05-17 . chapter 1beautiful. really touching. amazing poem. |
 A Chroi 2004-05-11 . chapter 1Oh, dear...now I'm breaking the keyboard again. You'd think I'd learn not to cry on it one of these days. This was a lovely, lovely poem, and whomever it is dedicated to is incredibly lucky to have a friend like you on their side. Thank you for posting this. |
 AllThatMatters 2004-05-11 . chapter 1Aww :'( We are sorry for your loss. It's a very touching poem.
PS if you want, please reveiw us back.
PSS Just wondering, why do fools fall in love? |