Bwaha, never fails to make me laugh out loud.

Hello

Well finally I get to make a suggestion, and I'm sorry I have basically rambled on in these reviews without making any constructive comments. There just hasn't been anything I've noticed that I would honestly change. So, in this poem, in the last line "Or they'll drink your coffie ... a..." you might want to put "a" as something else to emphasize it, like an "ahh!"

Otherwise, those are some very interesting things you have done I think...but I really now have to ask, what in the world are "the mangos?" Is that the equivalent of beating someone over the head with a cocanut? Or Garden nomes who steal your sanity...slowly? I'm amused...

Remy/The Blind guardian

Ah... Skiv, my friend, Sni needed that one. Really ... To business...Have you done everything on this list? Some of them I've done...the thunderstorm one is especially enjoyable... and the hot honey buns...Thanks for that, see yas latre,*Sni

youre so funny. I have to compliment you on the last line though, oh and everything else too, the rhythm waqs perfect. Great stuff-Keith Andrew

Thanks, that song really made me smile.

*bows to you* Holy chocolate-covered Chex Mix, Batman! You rock my socks! *bows again*

*should be "penguin pajamas," shouldn't it?
Absolutely crazy. *gasp of laughter* You, my dearest of Skivs, belong in a nut-house. *hums happily* As do we all. 'Cept for Swishboy, of course. But he's dull that way. Not up with the times.

Funny...but it just seems like random nonsense at the moment. a refrain to tie it together would help.

*Grin*
*Applause*

Comic brilliance again, Skivkah. I'll have to try a few of these... I wonder where you get the form for summoning rain?
(We now interrupt this review for a subliminal message.
"MANGARCY, government ruled by mangos, IS THE ANSWER!"
Back to our regularly scheduled blather.)
The rhyming scheme was really catchy... I have bits of it stuck in my head now. What larks. _

I laughed, I had my granparents look at me like I was psychotic. And I even tried a few! Much fun. And well writen by the way.

Haha. You are a crazy individual, Skiv.
And we love you for it.
Naquam

that was so cute - i really liked it.