WHOO. Yay for absolute awesomeyness :0

I liked it, and for the first time I'm glad there isn't going to be another chapter.

Hey! It's really neat. I like it a lot.

That's not fair. That's just plain unfair.
Now I'll never know if that Ben Franklin (he was a rather odd man) or just some random dude, or if he was the only smart one on the train or if he was crazy.
Evil man. Thats what you are.

I can see how this may be considered Rod Sterlingesque. But the whole naked thing kind of kills the suspense. Nudity always has that effect for some odd reason.

You have to continue!