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| Luneko 2005-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseMacabre and harsh, yet delicately formed and enticingly wrought. It reminds me of hell, the eternal death. Chilling ending. |
| poetic abortion 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseYou sent chills down my spine. ^-^ Great job. ~ Noelle ~ |
| Lidless Eye 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome... Great everything. Images, power, just... great. Brilliant brilliant awesome awesome job. Keep it up! ~Lidless Eye |
| Blaze the Unmaker 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseYou use such well-flowing adjectives in the first stanza! I like it. The imagery is amazing throughout the whole thing and I can sometimes interpret the meaning in many different ways. Chills! |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI read this so long ago, and I loved it then as much as I love it now. I love your diction, imagery... your way with words. There's a sort of macabre beauty in this, which I love, by the way. Brilliant, BRILLIANT, poem. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuseWell—pretty gruesome way to go. m |
| shredmyties 2004-08-17 ch 1, | abuseso many delicate visions of death, so lovely |
| simpleplan13 2004-08-14 ch 1, | abusewow.. very creepy |
| Ed Girl 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abuseyou have a gift for words dont ever lose that it is a fantastic poem the descriptions are wonderful |
| Carter Tachikawa 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseExcellent job with a sestina. Those things are insanely difficult to write. To make them sound good is even harder. Kudos on a job well done. Keep up the good work. ~CT |
| Hershey249 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseWow...I just learned what a sestina was recently, and these things are ridiculously hard to write. I haven't tried, but I don't have to, I can just tell. You said this is just about death, but it almost sounds like it's about vampires, also. The imagery is almost yelling that at me. :P Really strong, it rings that disturbing chord. Great job. |
| Summerdazed 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abuseit was perfect! though it's the first time I heard of a er...sestina(?). review me if you're free! =summerdazed= |
| PheonixSlayer 2004-06-10 ch 1, | abuseit's rather amazing how you put those words together to be so beatiful, so dark and terrifying, beauty nonetheless. excellent! |
| Mime 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuse*shivers* Ooh, this is spooky. Sestinas are hard; I couldn't write one half as well as this. How do you do it, really? |
| Eirien 2004-05-21 ch 1, | abuseBrilliantly written. Depressing to read, certainly, but that is exactly because you conjure up that atmosphere, get across that hopelessness, darkness, decay, despair etc. so perfectly through your word choice and splendid images. Perfectly done. |