powerful... as your other poems.
You're on my favourite authors list. =)

*tackles voice* Shut up, you twit!
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-straightens shirt- Achem, I liked it. It's sort of on the suicidal side, but nonetheless, I still like it.
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Regina O.B.

Hey, I think I may have already reviewed this piece... oh well! I really like it, of courseI like pretty much all of your stuff... "and I can hear her laughing" its scary but true... Keep writing, oh yeah.. andI hope your computer gets fixed soon!
Love,
~Bethy~

o, In some ways I can relate. Oh by the way this is Guy! lol. Read my bio it will tell. In the last review Im sure I would've been freaked out, "Lon time no see"? lol. ANyway. Yes good poem and I really can relate in some ways. Remember! SUICIDE is a perminant solution to a temporary problem.

this flows beautifully.. i love the way it evolves... extremely powerful message... awesome

Interesting perspective poem. It conveys its message well. I wish people didn't have such problems, that there was less suffering in the world. That train of thought kind of reminds me of my poem "If Only." Bah, in any case, nice work. If you are feeling down lately, I hope you feel better soon. The dark places of this world, or of the mind, are never nice to visit... In any case, take care. Keep writing.

most friends in ur head will laugh bc they know that they have won. i hate that sound it so hollow and cold. but u have to have the last laugh! i know i have for no matter how many pills or how deep i cut i wont die, not yet, not now, bc i realize at that moment i cant die i need to laugh at her to get my peace of mind.