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| Tom Madden 2004-06-21 ch 1,   | wow, that was really good. great discriptive writing! keep up the good work! |
| Song of Life 2004-06-20 ch 1, | very good very descriptive |
| Impressionist 2004-06-15 ch 1, | interesting... |
| Cal Miskimen 2004-05-21 ch 1, | Good! I like the choice of words! I would write more but am finding it hard to come up with words. I'm having a very long creative block both writting and drawing! |
| Steelsings 2004-05-11 ch 1, | So you did write it! I knew from the moment you told me the title it would be good - and I was not disappointed. "Hell's Jubilee". Ooh, it sends shivers down my spine! Or shall I say, "chills running up and down my scalp?" Only two more days before I must leave you again my dear. Perhaps we might both surprise each other with the results of our challenges? |
| born blue 2004-05-11 ch 1, | i love the way you describe this... you have so much talnt.. this is wonderful |
| Matthew James Current 2004-05-11 ch 1, | Oh. Delicious. I enjoyed reading this one. One idea though: wouldn't it sound wonderful if after the line "Into frigid chambers" you put "sunken-in like the eye-holes of a skull"? That would certainly sound deliciously disturbing. My I am in an odd mood today. In any case, feel free to stop by and check out my latest work "Justice?" you might like it. Also, if you have a taste for the darker things you might enjoy "Darkness Feeds It" or "InNeR DeMoNs." In any case have a wonderful day and thanks for your reviews. Take care now! |
| master of suspence 2004-05-11 ch 1, | well first off i have to say very well writen.next i would like to say that i like it, it can discribe so many other people, so dont ever let ur mind make u think that u r. |