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| FairyTaleQueen 2005-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this. It's so true. |
| Dancinggal5389 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful and the flow is perfect. i adore this one...u r gifted! |
| saiya-jinmira 2004-06-30 ch 1, | abusevery eloquently put. I liked it. hm one qeustion you said you would post a lot here and youve been a member for a while and yet I only see 7 entries... |
| heavenleigh5 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abusei can see that this must hav been an old flame. i kinda feel like this, disappointed and let down. I've updated HLM,HLMN. id really appreciate if you'd have a look? heavenLeigh xx |
| Dumon 2004-05-18 ch 1, | abuseViolet Blues, thank you sincerely for reading my work. i admire your greatly, for you have an ability to ryhme that I could never really be able to. I also take french(3 years totally sucks b/c I can't say cr*p) anyway I think this one totally hits home. i've felt that way with some guys before who were not what I thought they were. one in particular who till this day I can't forget. I don't really think I loved him, he just broke a promise that I still can't forgive. I refered this to some friends so you'll get some more reviews, also you're on my favorite authors. well thank you again. Later, Dumon |
| simpleplan13 2004-05-16 ch 1, | abusei do liek it.. great description.. nicely written.. tahnks for your reviews |
| Halfaway 2004-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI think I do, *grins*, but I loved this way beforeI figured out who and what you were talking about. Man, sometimes I really hate you for being able to write like this, but that is only sometimes. Just like the times you sometimes "confirm" certain "rumors" about specific people we both know aren't true. Or sometimes when you say You are "over" others. You know I luff ye! I dare say we are both going through this whole "art imitate school work" thing of ours that centers mainly around 3rd and 6th period. Shakespeare rocks! Mr. J is so weird, I met him the other day. ~ 'My P.S~ I wrote "Buford" way before Winston ever gave us that dumb book to read. It fits though, thanks for the new perspective; I really wrote it about a nightmare I had. |
| Kris 56 2004-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is a good poem! I like it! |