   Unknowingly lost 2007-12-21 . chapter 1So morbid..so emo...so gloomy, dark, and melancholy...yet so beautiful. I love it! |
 Nallybaba 2007-07-15 . chapter 1 OMG UR SO ** EMO! |
 Aznboy714 2004-06-16 . chapter 1Aw how happy. |
 The Mushroom Fairy 2004-05-11 . chapter 1O.O
I...love it. *clicks to faves* I'm no poet; I like rhyming things, but I've found that not just anyone can pull it off well. You've succeeded commendably. |
 Sara Bickley 2004-05-11 . chapter 1Well, the rhyme and meter are almost perfect, the imagery is fine -- I'm seeing it as comic-book frames in my head -- and basically this is quite the solid poem. (BTW, I like your screenname.) |
 Sworn Destiny 2004-05-11 . chapter 1Wow. That's pretty..intense.
O_o Btw, isn't a limerick those poems where the first two lines rhyme, then the third/fourth lines rhyme, then the fifth rhymes w/ the first two?
Ah, not like it matters. This is a good poem. |
 Infinite Smiles 2004-05-11 . chapter 1Great rythm.. Well done. |
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