 kczNZ 2009-06-17 . chapter 25LOVE this story. One of the first i read since stumbling on this site a few months back. Nice to read a story with the highschool romance thing but without the typical popular guy, nerdy girl cliche :) Any way thanks for a good read. |
 CaliGirls.AtHeart 2009-01-02 . chapter 1i love your stories.
any chance you will update them soon? |
 Bellaria 2008-07-11 . chapter 25i love this so much, one day if you ever do come back to it please know that i will be watching it as it bloody well rocks!! |
 Michelle :D 2008-06-19 . chapter 25 I really really like this story. Are you ever going to update? |
 MZ PEACHESZZ 2007-11-01 . chapter 25 so i wait, everyday, checking and checking back to see if there is an update...anything, a note, an excuse, a word that says that you're still alive somewhere, anywhere...but there's nothing.
please continue ben and hailey's story...it started off immature and wordy and not wordy enough and cliche and not worth it and evolved into one of the most tender, realistic, and affectionate relationships i have ever read about. i want to see them...please, at least, leave a note...tell us you are still here...have you given up writing? |
 PINKGAZER1990 2007-09-03 . chapter 1i read all three of these about ben and haliey and i loved them! amazing story =]=]=]=] keep writing. |
 A former faithful reader 2007-07-13 . chapter 1 I don't normally do this, but I had to in your case. After over a year of no updates I am officially giving up on this story (and you, I suppose). I am going to forget that this installment ever happened. I think it's sad that you even started this if you weren't going to finish it. A lot of your fans probably agree. I realize you don't want to be a writer, but it's kind of mean to start something and not finish it. Or even give updates on what's going on. Or write a short epilogue explaining how it was to end up if you had continued the story. There was so much left to do. You have a gift, it's too bad that you're not going to pursue it, but you have to do what you feel is best. I'm just saddened that Ben and Hailey got kind of left up in the air. I agree with the reviewer before me. I hope you decide to maybe revisit your stories since you have four I was reading that were left unfinished. It's a real letdown.
I doubt you'll even see this since you seem to have abandoned FP. I hope this isn't too harsh, but I can't help but be bitter because I really enjoyed your writing and characters. Good luck. |
 Katie 2007-03-18 . chapter 25 I understand that you have a life, I really do. And I find no fault in you wanting to take your time in updating. But you have done what all the great writers do and made us care for your charecters. And I want to know what is going to happen to the charecters. I dont mind waiting for updates but I would like to know if this is something worth waiting for. I have been reading your stories for a while now and have not commented on them because I am a lurker and not an actual member of FP but I felt I needed to tell you how much I have enjoyed reading you stories. I just reread you Ben and Hailey series and I must say that your writing has improved since you started. I have actually read all of the stories you wrote. I also love Romeo and Juliet Revisited. I get so excited when I find out that you have updated. But it hasnt happened in a while. Please take into consideration that there are many of us out here that love you stories and really want to know what is going to happen to Ben and Hailey. I don't want to pressure you or anything, just let us know if you are going to continue updating or if your stories are soemthing is should give up on. I won't be upset if you have decided to stop writing (well I will because I want to know what is going to happen, but I can understand that there are somethings you grow out of) Good Luck in whatever you pursue and Thank you for writing such engaging and wonderful charecters.Katie |
 SiobhanO 2007-01-25 . chapter 25oh, wow. i love this chapter so much. ben is finally gowing up!
update son - pretty please? |
 justine dayea 2007-01-24 . chapter 25I read Anyone But Me, Splintered tears and the latest chapter of Whenever it rains for these past 3 or more days. And because of your stories, I got hooked up to coldplay. Well, they are a really good band. But my appreciation to their music was brought a notch higher because of your stories. They really crack me up most of the time, but there are times that they can really be depressing(?).
anyways, keep up the good work. I really enjoy reading your works, |
 SiobhanO 2007-01-24 . chapter 24shawet story. wow. |
 SiobhanO 2007-01-23 . chapter 12wow. amazing. |
 SiobhanO 2007-01-23 . chapter 7ew! george is so gross hahha |
 SiobhanO 2007-01-23 . chapter 1Wow i'm so pleased that you wrote a sequel! |
 lil' kayla 2007-01-12 . chapter 1i love your stories about ben and hailey i have read all three in three nights and i can't wait for you to update this on i'm actually getting ready to put you on my favorite story and authors list so keep writting and i can't wait for an update. |