wow...i'm just kind of sitting here going "wow"
That's awesome.

wow, you have got some talent! whether your speaking from experience or from someone else's point of view...it was possitively amazing. it portrays exactly how every girl practically feels, seeing the stick skinny chicks on tv, in magazines, flaunting what they've got. You truely captured a topic that is hard to express! way to go!

O.O WoW o.o wOw What a powerful poem from people mostly women to be proud of themselves no matter they shape. I love it, it is well versed and sensible. Yet it screams and roars of helplessness and tragedy. Great work take care.

Wow.. it's beautiful and so sad. It's an endless battle. Can't be happy as your are, but eventually not eating won't make you happy either. This is a wonderful wonderful poem and I can really relate. Beautiful job.

Oh dear. This is so beautiful, but I am sorry to say that I know exactly what it's describing, and have been through it more than once. Still, the words really paint a clear picture in this poem. Well written.

ah oh i feel that way... i hate it... *sighs* i hate the feeling i mean ;) just clarifying.

Read a few poems about anorexia on and this has a really good rhythm and rhyme. In fact, so good, I sometimes got lost in the flow and didn't really pay that much attention to the words the first time. *sheepish*
It's good, thoughtfully written, but there's one error near the end. "And now I can't shallow" should be "swallow" instead. That suddenly made me think of a girl drowning in a swimming pool!
Izzy J.

Wow, I really like this it's very well crafted and has deep meanings. Excellent