Oh... I like this poem, its like souls come out to play in the night... wow, that sounds pretty cool. Ever thought that maybe when you're asleep, you're actually awake. Or vice-versa. That Matrix sorta bit. I think. Uh... well, I like the reality mix fantasy thing. Oh! You know what this poem kinda reminds me of? Have you ever like, fallen asleep, or were close to and like reality just mixes into your dreams and you can't tell if you're dreaming or you're actually wide awake? Sorry... kinda rambling at this point. I just always thought that reality and dreaming was an interesting subject. Strange things happen in real life. Hm... yah... I'm pretty off subject aren't I? I bet your knitting your eyebrows together, wondering what the heck I'm talking about. WEll, it was a great read though. I love walking down memory lane. Happy readings!

I really liked the...dreamy quality. Which makes sense, seeing this is about dreams. =P The tone and overall feel is very smoky, surreal, etc. Great work!

that was beautiful- i really, really liked it, especially that first stanza. the whole poem was awesome, great job!

Woah, this is really good too! I enjoyed reading both parts!

Wow, that's an amazing poem! I like it a lot! It's really good!