This was amazing, no lies. I really felt what you were getting at and the rhythm is crystal clear. This is one of my favorite myths too. The words are beautiful, kinda makes me wish that I could hear it. [On a side note: I hate that poem I wrote too ... I had quite the miserable experience with my ex recently and now it kind of makes me want to scream when I read it. Sometimes people tend to suck that way.]

Awesome song! I loved everything about! This was such an amazing theme! Great job!

That is great stuff. The rythm and everything is perfect. If you haven't already written actual music for this, you should!

I very much like the rhythm. Sorta cut off and whatnot. It makes it stand out more. And I absolutely love the idea of using Icarus as a metaphor...brilliant! PS Glad to see you're still alive. )