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| Blue Screen of Death 2007-01-21 ch 1,   | In a group of three - friends, enemies, it matters not - one, will always, ALWAYS, get hurt. Whether it is a betrayel, stuffing emotions so that 'they' can be happy, one moves away, or just simply because two find themselves more close than with the one - and the one can usually sense that the others just hang out with them for 'old times sake.' Yup, I can relate. And this story was very well written, the imagry quite powerful, I'd like to say I hope it works out for our nameless character -- but in that situation there is no solution...I'm glad I took the time to read this ;) |
| pneumothorax 2005-08-16 ch 1, | I've said this ended utterly unfinished. I retract that. The ending works fine. |
| who cares 2005-07-24 ch 1, | wow i just read this for the first time and all i can say is wow i'm hooked so please update and don't forget about it i love it and need to know what happens |
| Pure 2005-07-04 ch 1, | Oh, wow! This was nice and sweet and then I received a nasty slap in the face, bittersweet indeed. Thanks for that... I loved this. I felt it. I can somewhat relate to it. Cheers! |
| pneumothorax 2005-04-09 ch 1, | Sad but ending seems utterly unfinished. Leaves you wanting to know what's going to happen. |
| ATTITUDE01 2004-08-17 ch 1, | sad but loving will you write another chapter please? |
| Flawless Storm 2004-06-05 ch 1, | Aww... you are right. It is bittersweet, but well written. I don't believe I have personally gone through this, but I know of plenty of others who have. You should right more :) Flawless Storm. |
| The Paperback Mummy 2004-05-13 ch 1, | Gah. This WAS bittersweet. What a jerk Mike was. *shoots evil glare at him* I feel sorry for...did this even say what the narrarator's name was? Well, I feel sorry for her. Sometimes, boys...*rolls eyes* GREAT story. Really. |
| TrueJuliet 2004-05-13 ch 1, | Good Story, is that the end? It's too bad if it is, it was really good. |
| Gleechumber 2004-05-13 ch 1, | Although short, this is beautiful and says everything it needs to. Great work! |
| Cazzaa 2004-05-13 ch 1, | I fell for this. I like it. I like the way its written, the short structure, the simple imagery. What Ilike the most is the story. I'm a sucker for the sad ending stories. You got me. |
| inquistrix 2004-05-12 ch 1, | great write. easy to relate to, and written in a relly "flowing" kid of way. :) good stuff. check my stuff out if you've got the time. inzaniti |