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Hershey249 2005-03-13 . chapter 1
This definitely carries the emotion well. I didn't see anything specifically defining it until the stanza talking about insulation. It's such an interesting metaphor, it gives the whole piece a new twist. Keeping things in and out all at once...very accurate to this sort of situation. My condolences if this is about real life...but it turned out well.
Mina Skywalker 2004-08-10 . chapter 1
This is good! I really liked it. The way you described with such feeling. If you arn't too busy plz read and review my short story entitled The Violin! I'd appreciate it greatly! Keep up the awesome work!
IcyDevil27 2004-06-24 . chapter 1
That's so sad! So very sad, but good.
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