Love it.
Love you.
*huggles*
*kisses*
~ Kit ~

So like all of us... floating away on madness all day long its bombardment with new things: here learn this in two minutes, read that in 20 minutes, and while ur at it go and run this up to the office... we all just wish for some peace and happiness... if thats possible...

Excellent use of words. If only life could be a fariy tale and all could be solved in the whish of wand. Great work!
-Cindy Moon *)

Neverland, a place without age, a place without responsibility, a place without... love. Would you fly away to such a place? We once had a wonderland, but we destroyed it. replaced it with concrete and buzzing lights. But knowing what you know now, living how you live now, do you think you can live back when? When this was still a wonderland? Back before we made this godforesaken civilizaion? This... This imaginary cage? I don't think i could. I've grown too used to my confines. Love your imagery, ^^ oh, and Chibi Fuuma says "hi"
~Green Yoshi~

It begins good enough, changes in pace keep the reader interested as to the angles. Brought to a close well too.
Good luck in all your works
Nine Iron