this is absolutely beautiful! this is so beautiful and well written, i applaud you!|rikku|

Wow your work is really good, I like all your rhyming and thoughts that flow threw your writing, you remind my alot of myself, read my work and I thik you'll know why.

Wow this is good. Excellently written. One typo that stood out to me. Line 8; your should be changed to 'you're'.
I've thought some of these thoughts myself. Congratulations on being able to pin such a complicated subject and mess of thoughts and make it into a wonderful poem that moves at a fast pace.
Also, in response to your comment on 'the price of beauty', I think I'll take you up on that and perhaps write a poem on what you suggested. Thanks for the inspiration!

I really found this poem after reading my friend Koi's poem. I saw your review and your recomendation, decided to check it out. And boy am I glad I did ^^ I really like this, tremendously well written!

I love it! It actually gave me the thought of, Maybe I'm not the only person who thinks of love in such a way. Very well done, please continue with more! ~Amber~

awesome, it is really good. i like the rhythm of the whole thing.

So far this is the best I've stumbled into here for a long time. I like the way you wrote it...that descriptive type plus the rhyming scheme...I really think you've got art and lots of t- talent! Keep it up- I'll be looking forward to more of your poems.

(btw- why is it triple Y? are you a fan of triple h or somethin'?) :)
peace! XP