loneliness.. invisible love. this is so sad yet so tru- for me. i just lurv this poem. esp. the 'internal test' part. continue typin i just can't wait!

Ow... so true. I love it, it's amazing! you are truly gifted in finding the right words! by the way, I am 12 years old.
Sincerely,
Brian A.S.

such a nice poem.. i could relate to it, too.

Hmm another theme of invisibility, I like it...you're just amazing at conveying and describing. I can't find any other way to put it. You're an incredibly talented writer.

Very good, theme doesn't seem to be needed here - which is all good and well because there doesn't seem to be one. Good rhyming, another masterful piece of poetry. Keep it up.

I like it, espically your word choice. It adds a nice tone to it. I like the rhyme scheme also. RR my work sometime? Thanks.
*Racheal*

hum gots a theme going on here? i like it though!