This poem is so true, both the dream and the reality. I like the title of this one, I've never thought of dreams being transparent, but now that I've read this, it's a perfect adjective for it!

I so imagined that, good job!

Hmm... vivid pictures have been placed into my mind, and your skill has been defined; extraordinary! Good one.

ah nice poem! i love dreams, but hate when the good ones dont come through... oops i mean true! ;) silly me :P (new poem posted :) sorry. had to say...)

Wow! Amazing and vivid imagary!