wow, i can relate. i loved your wording, it made the poem seem very real. well done!!

love, VB

i like the consistancy of your poem and how you dont stray to far from your original topic. Your words are simple yet speak alot

Wow ash...Kewl! I loved it! I know how that feels. I stayed up till 6 am once...

Ah, I hate having insomnia. Anyways, nice well-written poem. I know what it feels like to not sleep all night.