|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| zippy 2005-12-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm too lazy to sign in. Are ya gonna make me edit this for you? If so, e-mail it to me or something. It's good though. |
| Lord Oren 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story so you get cheese P.S> Lancelot is gay! |
| Your missing triplet 2004-08-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseokay Terry.. you haven't updated dangit.. do u want me to bite u?? cuz I will.. not only did you leave me at birth and not only is it 5:30 am and not only is my bf getting up in an hour and a half.. but but BUT BUT BUT (is that enough buts?) you left me with a cliff hander.. i hate you =) r/r me now since i'm one up on ya hahhahahahahhahaha oh and call me about the movie. ~Missing Triplet |
| DrunkenMonkeyKing 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseYes, finally got a chance to read this. Good stuff, and no, Lancelot is not gay, just extremely, extremely violent. But he's a Knight of The Round Table, so I guess we'll have to forgive him for killing the Bride's father. |
| Black Locket 2004-05-31 ch 2, anon. | abusePeople need to review this. It makes me cry when I lcick it and see only like 12 reviews. Review people, review! -runs off to abuse non-reviewing people- They are the scum on the meniscus of Fictionpress. So are ya going to update soon or what?? |
| Sir Keilah 2004-05-31 ch 2, | abuseWell, I never read the original version of this, but this one is fairly good. I do have issues with cliffhanger endings because then I... well, lets see, I wonder about what is going to happen for about the next ten seconds and then wander off dejected, but that's not the point. Please update. I like the characters so far, and am interesting in seeing more of their personalities and of course, would love to figure out what's going on... it's a really strong beginning, and I look forward to reading it when you update next. -Keilah |
| Black Locket 2004-05-29 ch 2, | abuseWell this is different. I dont remember Di's brother being... wahtever's wrong with him. (Deaf I'm assuming.) Either I have a really bad memory or... or... YOU CHANGED IT ON ME! -runs off weeping- Lol. Anyway I like the change. It flows better and, uh, its better? Yeah... thats it. |
| crystal-chan 2004-05-28 ch 2, | abusehahah. Good story! Update soon por favor! |
| AethraZip 2004-05-27 ch 2, | abuse^^ Meep. |
| Lotuss Tears 2004-05-20 ch 1, | abuseVery nice start here, i don't think you suck at Romance at all, love the banter between friends, it was like i was right there in the car with them. Hinting at the abuse to start with was good too, stories about abuse can be rough and emotional and sometimes ** a sensitive reader, too much at once can be an overload, but awesome job thus far =] keep up the good work |
| Riely Marie 2004-05-20 ch 1, | abuseOkay... Here's review #1 lol... any how.. it really didn't change much from what you wrote, and I saw... except... yeah okay it didn't change much lol okay.. but heres my /actual/ review... I thought it was good... some punctuation errors.. cammas and all that jazz... anyhow... YOU BETTER GO REVIEW MY STUFF! I like it... umm... hm I already know what his secret it lol... your not good @ hiding stuff Terry... *wink* I still love ya!! muahhahahha okay anyways... I think I've written you a novel.. so is this long enough for ya? any who... Keep writing! ~Riely Marie~ |
| DMK 2004-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseCan't read it now (in a hurry) but I'm glad to see you finally put this back up! It's about goddamn time! |
| Black Locket 2004-05-17 ch 1, | abuseWhen Aethrazip e-mailed me to tell me this was back up I called her a liar. Lucky for me she has a good sense of humor. About the story. Its even better than it was last time. I hope you don't take it down again? -puppy eyes- |
| Zip 2004-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseLookit that, you. Three reviews already. ^^ Now that I've disappointed you (you thought this was from someone else, didn't you?), I'm off to put a shameless plug for this in Lagrimas ch10's author's note. ~Zip |
| Sidewalks 2004-05-16 ch 1, | abuseHii. I had read this already but I kinda wandered off and forgot to leave a review. I suck. Anyway, yes. You've got really likeable characters here and I guess we'll get to know more about them in the future. -nods. Sorry if I don't say much more, I'm running on insomnia and my brain died but I did like this. I'll make sure I read and review once you'll have another chapter up! |