I like the poem and it's questoning nature.
Good things happen and bad things happen so whom do we credit to for the good and blame to for the bad?

Wow. The repitition and the twist at the end really pull it all together.

I like the repetition. It works well.

hehehe nice job! thnx for all the reviews as well ;)

This is really good... even though you say you're agnostic, I can tell you that most Christian will both agree with this, and be able to relate to it. I love it... especially with all the shit going on in the world at the moment.