Reviews for The End of Time - FictionPress.com

rust phoenix 2006-11-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is actually one of my favorite pieces of yours. The language you used worked well, it wasn't overly simplistic or complicated just for the sake of being so. It reminds me of a science fiction short story I read a long time ago. You said DROPPED in your summary, does that mean you will not be continuing this? If that is the case it's too bad, but I guess I'll just have to read your newer stuff.
PenMage62442 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abuseI think your language is really advanced. Even if you don't use "big words" your words flow really smoothly. Some of it reminds me... just a little... of The Second Coming. ("Destinies clash. Fates will be sealed.) But I know the actual story would vary greatly from that poem. Who's the narrator, I wonder?
CallingJaneDoe 2006-08-25 ch 1,	abuseI had to really pay attention to get it- but thats a good thing. Stuff that I can just skim over without any major interest is no where near as good as things which actually grab my attention. Which this did, written extreamly well too btw!
still2twisted 2004-08-16 ch 1,	abuseShort, but well written. You have some serious talent and I hope that you continue with this story. Are you a 'Wheel of Time' fan? I saw the term 'Siswai'aman' on your profile page and just thought I'd ask. But anyways, good work. Hope to see more soon! See you next review!