Just one problem. Accept evil? It may be fruitless to fight it, but I will never accept it. Fight it, because evil turns your entire creed upside down and inside out, so that your creed becomes your bane. Other than that, cool, i liked it

Excellent...I like how you take what someone else might phrase simply (i.e. 'don't kill') and make it...prettier? Better-sounding, definitely. Very good; going on my faves list.

Wow, that is really well done, I like, it gives me inspiration with life.
~Diane

I must say I really like this poem. It seems so simple and yet says so much. Very nice!

I like all of the ideas behind this one...

Hey Orion,
How's it going buddy? Obviously very well since your poems are still as beautiful as they used to be. This one is as touching as the others, and I truly appreciate it. Keep writin.
Peace out and lotsa luv,
M.e.