wow... another beautiful one. *more tears*

wow...thx alot...now im wondering too :P haha jk. this is a very powerful poem and i think it is your best one ive read so far. i always like the personal poems ppl write, they are always more deep and flowing of emotion. i wish i cud write a poem as well as you, but alas i am stuck writing stories of pain and love :P awsome poem, never stop writing

very nice. its really a sweet piece

Yeah, kinda forgot to add something there...
One of the only ways you'll grow is to receive flames. Don't be afraid to receive flames. Heck, flames are cool at some point y'know, and they help you look at something about your writing.

Hmm... certainly thoughtful but I think you can do better than that. Love comes to us when we least expect it, and love is not limited to a significant other, always remember that. Want to know what love is? 1st Corinthians 13.